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		<title>Diary of an Accidental NaNoWriMo Participant</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 02 Nov 2008 02:29:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[As I&#8217;m sure any of my regular readers here are aware, I had been planning to participate in NaNoWriMo again this year, but with a plan &#8212; an outline, even &#8212; ready in advance of November 1st.  The last two &#8230; <a href="http://thehousealwayswins.ca/2008/11/01/diary-of-an-accidental-nanowrimo-participant/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As I&#8217;m sure any of my regular readers here are aware, I had been planning to participate in <a title="National Novel Writing Month" href="www.nanowrimo.org">NaNoWriMo</a> again this year, but with a plan &#8212; an outline, even &#8212; ready in advance of November 1st.  The last two months, however, have been extremely busy for me academically, and I have been struggling to balance all of the things I <em>have</em> to do, much less the things I <em>want</em> to do.</p>
<p>Because of this, I hadn&#8217;t gotten any real outlining done, as as November crept closer and closer, I was leaning more and more toward the idea that this year really wasn&#8217;t a good one for me to do it again.  Not in November, while I had teaching committments, and a committee meeting to prepare for, and the like.</p>
<p>But then I got an e-mail reminding me to register for NaNoWriMo this year.  And before I&#8217;d realized what I was doing, it was done &#8212; I was signed up for 2008.  And since I&#8217;m signed up, I&#8217;ve at least go to <em>try</em>.  While I don&#8217;t think I&#8217;ll have enough time to hit the 50,000 work mark this month, I know I&#8217;ll write more by trying than if I&#8217;d just decided to not participate.</p>
<p>So I might try a different approach.  Last year, I worked on a novel, and got 50,000 words of a first draft done.  While I do have ideas for a new novel, I also have some shorter projects I&#8217;m interested in working on.  Thus, I&#8217;m going to aim for 50,000 words aggregated over all the new fiction that I write.  That might mean two or three short pieces and 30,000 words of a novel, or some other mix.  There will be a novel involved, that much is certain.</p>
<p>Anyway, if I&#8217;m going to hit my quota for today, I&#8217;d better stop blogging and start writing.  Well&#8230; at least after I finish the other post I&#8217;ve been working on for the past week.</p>
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		<title>Rereading My First Novel</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Sep 2008 03:46:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[As you may recall, I participated in NaNoWriMo last November, and finished the draft of my first novel back in February.  In May, I decided to start revisions.  That was the start of my trouble.  You see, before I could &#8230; <a href="http://thehousealwayswins.ca/2008/09/01/rereading-my-first-novel/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As you may recall, I participated in <a title="National Novel Writing Month" href="http://www.nanowrimo.org/" target="_self">NaNoWriMo</a> <a title="NaNoWriMo 2007 is Done!" href="http://thehousealwayswins.ca/2007/12/02/nanowrimo-2007-is-done/" target="_self">last November</a>, and <a title="My First Novel is Finished!" href="http://thehousealwayswins.ca/2008/02/09/my-first-novel-is-finished/" target="_self">finished the draft of my first novel</a> back in February.  In May, I decided to <a title="My First Novel, Round 2" href="http://thehousealwayswins.ca/2008/05/13/my-first-novel-round-2/" target="_self">start revisions</a>.  That was the start of my trouble.  You see, before I could revise anything, I had to reread it.  And that was a painful, painful experience.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s not that I expected it to be well-written or anything, given how fast I had to churn it out.  But it is truly, utterly dismal.  I expect I&#8217;ll have to do a total blank-screen rewrite, rather than just touch-ups.  Which means its going to take a lot longer than I&#8217;d hoped.</p>
<p>It doesn&#8217;t really have a viewpoint character.  It makes a lot of use of the passive voice (likely a carry-over from my scientific writing).  There are structural problems.  It has unnecessary characters, it introduces the villains too late, it doesn&#8217;t make the villains sympathetic, it takes <em>far</em> to long to get going, and it doesn&#8217;t really show much in the way of character development.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s almost enough that I&#8217;d want to just trunk it and move on to something new, but&#8230; I see some rays of hope in there.  Some potential.  I like the story.  And while there isn&#8217;t much character development currently on the page, it&#8217;s in my head.  So I want to try and actually finish a draft that I wouldn&#8217;t be embarrassed to show to other people.  Something that might eventually approach publishable (even if I&#8217;m not sure there&#8217;s a market for it).</p>
<p>My next step in revising will be to do a scene-by-scene outline, identifying all the scenes that I&#8217;m keeping and their purpose in the novel, and developing new ones to patch up the flaws I&#8217;ve found.  If I can do that during September, I think that will be some good progress, and I can dedicate October to outlining a new novel for the next NaNoWriMo in November.</p>
<p>At least, so long as I get some of my own research done, first.  Sigh.</p>
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